From the Archives: Fred McCready Learns to Say Yes

Note: Here’s a little short story I pulled out of the archives. Enjoy!

Fred wanted to be polite and well-behaved. He had learned as a kid to just go along with things, to not rock the boat. When asked if he wanted a drink of water, he’d mumble a reply, “yeah” or “nah.” Sometimes he’d be served the water, sometimes not. He just took what came to him. He didn’t suffer… much.

One day his girlfriend asked, “Whadda ya think Fred, you wanna get married?”

Fred froze at the thought of marriage. He wanted to put it off into some future time. Then again, he really liked Mandy. He’d hate to lose her over this. Fred shrugged his shoulders, dipped his chin and mumbled his unclear reply. He meant, I don’t know Mandy, why don’t we think this over more? Maybe in the future…

Mandy took the dip of Fred’s chin as a nod yes. The next day she had paperwork. She had an appointment with the Justice of the Peace.

Fred didn’t want to hurt Mandy’s feelings and he didn’t want to be alone. There was no gracious, comfortable way to get out of it. He went along and got married.

Mumbling through Married Life

It turned out that marriage was okay with him. Fred seemed to get what he needed in life. He mumbled his way through his job as a cook. He didn’t communicate clearly enough to work with customers. In the job interview, he had given unclear answers and he just seemed to fall into that position.

Fred took up karate, with Mandy’s support. He started standing up straighter. 

One day while sparring, Fred’s partner socked him good in the belly.


Yes and no: clear communication is important when working with a partner.

Maté!” the sensei paused the match. “Was that too hard Fred?”

He mumbled through his mouthpiece, “Yeah.”

But it sounded like, “Nah.”

“It’s fine, keep going!” The instructor said, and Fred took some more hard punches.

By now Fred and Mandy had a daughter. By now Mandy realized that Fred seemed unclear about whether he liked their life together.

The Importance of “Yes” and “No”

He was mumbly and shruggy, but Fred was no dummy. He slowly but surely learned from karate. Fred started speaking more clearly. His new confidence showed in his walk and his talk. Fred learned the habit of saying, “yes” and “no.” It was difficult at first, but with time it became second nature.

Fred applied to interview for a chef position. He made eye contact and spoke clearly. He stood out with his sure demeanor, and he got a better job.

Mandy had been wondering for a long time now if Fred liked his life. One day, she brought it up to him, “I’m afraid I pushed you into marriage. Are you happy with our life together?”

Fred thought of their daughter, who meant more to him than life itself. He thought of how much Mandy supported him. Fred was happy. He sat up straight, looked her in the eye, and said, “Yes.”

Check out another shorter short story of mine here.

-Jenifer Tull-Gauger

Jenifer Tull-Gauger Kyoshi

Children's picture book author/illustrator. Traditional karate teacher and practitioner. Loves drawing and all kinds of art. Also into animals, plants and Mother Nature.

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